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TP Link - WIP 3 by ~Applies:iconApplies:


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Submitted: January 1
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Yeah. Not done yet... >_>;; Sorry its a bit pixelated. I have no idea why my scanner did that. And it was the scanner, not the file. It was like that after I accepted the upload. It's blurry too... I should re-size it... DX And the lines are WAY darker than on the paper.

Anywho, would I be able t ask for more advice, please? I read the ones from last time, even though I think I forgot to respond to a few... Or all... >_< More for clothing techniques, but comments for the face and hair are also greatly appreciated. :D

Anywho, I want to have this done hopefully by Saturday. So I'd reaaaaaaaally like your help... DX I think she hates me by now, though. Oh wells.

Thank you very much for your time...!

Link and the Legend of Zelda series (c) Shigeru Miyamoto and Nintendo

EDIT: Kinda late for wanting to finish it for Saturday. But, then again, I never did say WHICH Saturday...!!!111!11oneone :evillaugh:

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~Seikie:iconSeikie: Jan 1, 2008, 10:23:42 PM
Okay, awesome picture. Here's my advice.

For clothes, try cross-hatching in the shaded areas. The hair and face is great, maybe make the shoulders a little larger. They look to small for the head.

Okay I'm done :D

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I'm not weird... you're just too normal...
~Applies:iconApplies: Jan 1, 2008, 10:26:04 PM
Ookies. Thank you! ^_^

XDD I looked at the picture and his shoulders for what you said, and he reminded me of the movie 'Big' for some reason, and he raised his arms and the sleeves were too big and flopped over his hands... XDD

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"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."
~Seikie:iconSeikie: Jan 2, 2008, 9:44:28 AM
XD To Funny!

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I'm not weird... you're just too normal...
~Applies:iconApplies: Jan 2, 2008, 10:38:51 AM
I think that movie was on TV the other day, too. XD

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"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."
~Seikie:iconSeikie: Jan 2, 2008, 11:02:13 AM
I think it was, wow weird...

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I'm not weird... you're just too normal...
~Sakuramar:iconSakuramar: Jan 2, 2008, 1:56:12 PM Mood: Joy
I dunno why, I love his expression, it's sweet... and cute. Really, I love it.
Though the clothes need more shadowing, and the shoulders should be bigger. And there are more details on his shirt.
But it's going great, really, can't wait to see it finished!

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I´m not bleeding, but my chest really hurts inside. -Gaara.

People only see what is in the outside and judge you for that.

Me, hate her? OF course not, I only want to rip her eyes out and feed them to the ravens, but no, I do not hate her.
~Koholint:iconKoholint: Jan 2, 2008, 8:20:53 PM
I think everybody's gotten most of the crit in by now, and I do agree with it. :D And I do think is expression is sweet, too!

Maybe just shade a bit more, but the drawing's not finished, so shading can come later. ;)

I really like how this is comin' along! Can't wait to see more of it. :3

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Out of style? Antique? Just plain bizarre?

... I love it! :D
~masterlink2002:iconmasterlink2002: Jan 9, 2008, 7:15:11 PM Mood: Amazed
DAmn I wish I could draw this good.

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Dark Link: Give me caffeine and nobody gets hurt you all just get mortified.

Love is a battlefield....
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....*Hugs Daeva*
~Applies:iconApplies: Jan 10, 2008, 3:09:44 PM
DX Why is everyone being so negative towards their own artwork lately...? Nahss... @_@

You can draw well~ Have more faith. And if you still don't think you do, just keep practicing. And if you do think you draw well; Practice anyway. It's the only way to improve...! DX<

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"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."