This is an edit of the last work in progress of Link I made. For my brother's girlfriend. Anywho. I think it looks a lot better, thanks to your guys' advice and help! ^_^ So thanks!
It still bothers me a bit though, and I'd still REALLY REALLY like to know if it looks messed up in anyway, at all. So I can edit it before I start his clothing. So please critique honestly and constructively, in the same manner as last time. I'd really appreciate it! Oh, and the scanner blurred it a slight bit on the left side (Part of his hair and his ear). But I didn't edit it any where the scanner blurred it. Which is good.
You know, I think that you really have improve it, a lot, specially the nose and the eyes .
But I still believe that you can get better at the hair and another thing I noticed, is that the upper lip needs not to be with such hard lines, I would recommend more shadows, than lines.
And, (maybe itīs just me) but I feel that TP Link has a bit more evil eyes, not with a really soft expression, but a bit harder.
Anyway, is a REALLY nice drawing, and I bet that when you finish it, it will be awesome.
--
I´m not bleeding, but my chest really hurts inside. -Gaara.
People only see what is in the outside and judge you for that.
Me, hate her? OF course not, I only want to rip her eyes out and feed them to the ravens, but no, I do not hate her.
I am really impressed with the softness of expression in this piece!
One SMALL critique. Link's neck looks a bit skinny. I think it would balance the size of his head better if (my) the right edge of his neck were to be inline with where the jaw and ear connect. It seems just a SMIDGE off.
--
"When I am down on my knees and it hurts to believe ... you'll bring me back to life." - The World on a String, OLP
Everything's pretty good in this picture. Only thing I think should be improved would be the neck lines. I almost thought of saying to move his neck entirely but that tilt to his head makes the picture very soft. The shading is subtle but very effective.
Practical advice about dealing with online copyright violations including how to contact websites, what information to provide to help your report be dealt with quickly, and some useful resources on dA to help deter rippers from violating your copyright (oo-er!).
With a record level of nominations and suggestions on an almost daily basis, it would be hard to ignore the community call to recognise such a fine example of a deviant as `snowmask. Her constant presence since the formative years of deviantART has never wavered, demonstrating a natural ability to seek out and motivate those in need.
Katie's beautifully delicate artworks are elegant and instantly recognisable due to her finely tuned creative style, a clear reflection of her personality. With a multitude of journals which are thought provoking, funny and resourceful, it's impossible not to be touched by such a bright light in our community. Congratulati... Read More
Devious Comments
--
SINE, COSINE, TANGENT!!!!
Just keep improving it and working on it, and I'm sure it's going to look fabulous.
--
Knowledge is power, and power corrupts, so study hard and be evil!
But I still believe that you can get better at the hair and another thing I noticed, is that the upper lip needs not to be with such hard lines, I would recommend more shadows, than lines.
And, (maybe itīs just me) but I feel that TP Link has a bit more evil eyes, not with a really soft expression, but a bit harder.
Anyway, is a REALLY nice drawing, and I bet that when you finish it, it will be awesome.
--
I´m not bleeding, but my chest really hurts inside. -Gaara.
People only see what is in the outside and judge you for that.
Me, hate her? OF course not, I only want to rip her eyes out and feed them to the ravens, but no, I do not hate her.
One SMALL critique. Link's neck looks a bit skinny. I think it would balance the size of his head better if (my) the right edge of his neck were to be inline with where the jaw and ear connect. It seems just a SMIDGE off.
--
"When I am down on my knees and it hurts to believe ... you'll bring me back to life." - The World on a String, OLP
I actually didn't notice that until you mentioned it. o.o Thank you! I'll get on to editing it now...!
--
"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."
--
This is a VERY nice drawing. Realistic too. Good job!!
--
"In this country, a person that can stop a scooter single-handedly is not called a girl. It's called a 'mountain gorilla' " ~ Gintoki
~6-15
--
Scraps be good...
[link]
Previous Page123 Next Page