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Submitted: March 15
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Yeah, I suck with titles, and it's just a WIP, so I don't need one yet, right? plsagreewitmeh DX Plus my brain is dead from woroking on a bazillion things at once. Rarghhz. What does that have to do with anything? Braindeath? o.o Pouloobolasseboilabola.

The stray lines will be cleaned up later, and not everything is shaded properly yet. And I uberly messed up his hands. DX And his shoulders are too small again, aren't they? ><;;

Umm, yeah, advice from where to go from here would be nice... >_< And any criticism on what has already had been done would be nice as well... Oh, and yeah, it's Snowe again. I suck. XDD

IN DIFFERENT CLOTHES!!! >D

Yes, it makes all the difference. ALL THE DIFFERENCE!!!

Sorry. But anyhoo, His white hair in the background isn't showing up very well... Would it be a bad thing if I expanded it more, or is it alright the way it is? And one of my friends suggested he's holding a necklace in his clutched hand. Is that a good idea if I would draw that in? I like it, I think. Well, it's a cool idea. Yeah. >D

Sorry to bug you guys again. Your advice really helps. But does it annoy you that I ask for help every time I upload something? Sorry... *brainspazzflail* DX

We <3 kittens. And poutine is gross. That is all.

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~Koholint:iconKoholint: Mar 15, 2008, 11:35:13 AM
Hmm, being asked for crit? Annoying? Never! Nobody anymore asks for crit and I really enjoy helping people out. :D So if you ask for the crit, I'll give it to you! ;D

As for this one, I don't really see much wrong - you're definately improving! :D One thing you could focus on more is the torso - it appears to be just a tad bit small. The shoulders look great and the sleeves do too. :3

I do like the idea of him holding a necklace... that's very symbolic and would work wonderfully for the picture. :D

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Out of style? Antique? Just plain bizarre?

... I love it! :D
~Seikie:iconSeikie: Mar 15, 2008, 1:46:31 PM
He's so cuute <3

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*Seraphim-Silveran15:iconSeraphim-Silveran15: Mar 16, 2008, 12:03:15 AM
First things first, this looks really good. Love the shading. :)

Yeah, he looks too skinny. And I think his right hand should be bigger, since it looks like it's closer to the viewer.
*Caffeinemancer:iconCaffeinemancer: Mar 16, 2008, 12:40:00 PM
Ooo I love the shading! And the outfit has a great design! Personally, I think it's good as it is (about the hair and whether or not to expand it). There's emotional impact here and edginess that you might lose by adding in hair. Also, the necklace sounds like a good idea~ That'd be spiffy and even more awesomeful!

The only real critiquey thingy I can see, is the right arm (the one more towards the viewer) at the base there, where the arm connects into the shoulder - that right there is a little thick-seeming to me. Maybe I'm just seeing it wrong or something, but it kind of looks like the arm starts half-way across his chest right there. All you have to do is add a little line there, showing where the fabric folds, and that would make it look much more natural.

Other than that one little thing, I think it looks great! Nice job! :heart:

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~HylianWarrior:iconHylianWarrior: Mar 20, 2008, 7:09:06 PM
That's really awesome! I love the perspective and the shading, especially in the face. As for mistakes...let's see...I don't really know, to be honest! Nice job! ^^

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"So do all who live to see such times, but that is not for them to decide. All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us."
~Applies:iconApplies: May 3, 2008, 7:30:48 AM
Thank you! ^^

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"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."
~Applies:iconApplies: May 3, 2008, 7:33:15 AM
Wow, you're right. That would be really uncomfortable to move like that... XDD I'll fix that right away. :D

Thank you very much for the help, I really appreciate it! ^^

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"Whether I'm high and hopeful, or have fallen into the depths of despair. It doesn't matter. I'm going to pick my nose either way."
~HylianWarrior:iconHylianWarrior: May 3, 2008, 11:00:54 AM
You're welcome! ^^

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"So do all who live to see such times, but that is not for them to decide. All we have to decide is what to do with the time that is given to us."
~myshrinkingviolet:iconmyshrinkingviolet: May 4, 2008, 7:43:02 PM
awesomeness!! it's so cool even for a sketch^^

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